Constructive Criticism...

After showing our rough cut, we received a lot of feedback on how we can improve our video. This included:-

• Add more shots to develop the narrative- more spooky and intriging shots.
• We need more shots of the vampire as she hardly appears in the footage
• Swing shot- Try getting the two characters going oppoiste ways on the swings.
• Create continuity with the blood shots in through out the video, making all of the shots black and white with the blood in red.
• Make the sky shot darker.
• Do a shot of walking from the possessed womans point of view.
• Include more close ups to show the womans struggle.
• Maybe film a clock to show how the nightmare is developing over time
• Need more movement in the blood drinking shots.

We will now take this advice on board, refilm some shots and try hard to create a excellent end product.